- Zeeb_BladeMember
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Join date : 2019-03-01
Age : 29
ZeebBlade's Introduction
Fri Mar 01, 2019 10:19 pm
Name: Ken Styles
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Sexuality: Bisexual(Leans more on Females)
Personality: Friendly, Mostly keeps to himself, Intellectual(History), Blunt
Flaws (three or more): Weak left ankle, Prone to anger, Reckless, Autistic
Eye color: Light blue
Hair description: Medium length, Silver/White
Height: 5' 9"
Skin tone: Tanned
Ethnicity: Latino
Body structure: Biker build/Lean
Other details?: Looks scary, but is a very kind person
Place of Birth (city, state, country): Tampa Bay Florida, USA
Mortal Parent: Abigail Styles(Formally Valestone)
God Parent: Thanatos, the God of Death
Abilities (doesn't use energy to do): Near Idetic Memory; Small Necrotic damage when touching bare skin; Has an old flip phone that will ring and emit dark energy when near a deceased person's remains, when picked up, Ken can hear the victim's last words, if any were spoken
Powers (uses energy to do): Summoning: Weak Undead/Spirits, can only summon 3 of either, Has a 4 hour cool-down and cannot summon more than 3 active spirits/undead at a time, Summoned spirits/undead can go rouge; Chill Touch: Touches an enemy and makes them freeze in fear for up to 1 minute, Has a 15 minute cool-down; Horrific Wail: A cry that repels all enemies up to 15ft, Has a 30 minute cool-down as it tears his vocal chords
Pets (if any): Black and white cat named "Bane"
History (four sentences or more): Ken lived a very shelter life in South Tampa with a Christian family for most of his life. One day, at 12 years old, he was riding home from a local community center when he was hit by a car and had almost died. As he faded in and out of consciousness, his father, Thanatos, kept Ken's soul close and returned it to his body. From then on Ken has had a fascination with death and learned what he could about the subject and about the past. He came to the camp after his mother had a heart attack a week before coming. It tends to be a touchy subject to him.
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Sexuality: Bisexual(Leans more on Females)
Personality: Friendly, Mostly keeps to himself, Intellectual(History), Blunt
Flaws (three or more): Weak left ankle, Prone to anger, Reckless, Autistic
Eye color: Light blue
Hair description: Medium length, Silver/White
Height: 5' 9"
Skin tone: Tanned
Ethnicity: Latino
Body structure: Biker build/Lean
Other details?: Looks scary, but is a very kind person
Place of Birth (city, state, country): Tampa Bay Florida, USA
Mortal Parent: Abigail Styles(Formally Valestone)
God Parent: Thanatos, the God of Death
Abilities (doesn't use energy to do): Near Idetic Memory; Small Necrotic damage when touching bare skin; Has an old flip phone that will ring and emit dark energy when near a deceased person's remains, when picked up, Ken can hear the victim's last words, if any were spoken
Powers (uses energy to do): Summoning: Weak Undead/Spirits, can only summon 3 of either, Has a 4 hour cool-down and cannot summon more than 3 active spirits/undead at a time, Summoned spirits/undead can go rouge; Chill Touch: Touches an enemy and makes them freeze in fear for up to 1 minute, Has a 15 minute cool-down; Horrific Wail: A cry that repels all enemies up to 15ft, Has a 30 minute cool-down as it tears his vocal chords
Pets (if any): Black and white cat named "Bane"
History (four sentences or more): Ken lived a very shelter life in South Tampa with a Christian family for most of his life. One day, at 12 years old, he was riding home from a local community center when he was hit by a car and had almost died. As he faded in and out of consciousness, his father, Thanatos, kept Ken's soul close and returned it to his body. From then on Ken has had a fascination with death and learned what he could about the subject and about the past. He came to the camp after his mother had a heart attack a week before coming. It tends to be a touchy subject to him.
Re: ZeebBlade's Introduction
Fri Mar 01, 2019 10:30 pm
Hey, just a few things.
For the age, Greeks typically are 18 and under, or pushing it I'd say 19, so reduce that a bit.
The guitar and combat skills are more talents than abilities. Abilities are things he can do that are beyond-human that don't require energy. ex: For Thanatos, maybe being able to tell if someone is dead or alive?
Add some limits on summoning spirits, like how many, for how long, and a cooldown.
Add a cooldown to the horrific wail.
He has to be in camp by 13. Also, he probably wouldn't have seen his dad take his mom's soul, considering that gods don't visit the kids regularly unless there's like a major major emergency.
For the age, Greeks typically are 18 and under, or pushing it I'd say 19, so reduce that a bit.
The guitar and combat skills are more talents than abilities. Abilities are things he can do that are beyond-human that don't require energy. ex: For Thanatos, maybe being able to tell if someone is dead or alive?
Add some limits on summoning spirits, like how many, for how long, and a cooldown.
Add a cooldown to the horrific wail.
He has to be in camp by 13. Also, he probably wouldn't have seen his dad take his mom's soul, considering that gods don't visit the kids regularly unless there's like a major major emergency.
- Zeeb_BladeMember
- Posts : 3
Join date : 2019-03-01
Age : 29
Re: ZeebBlade's Introduction
Fri Mar 01, 2019 10:50 pm
Fixed.
Re: ZeebBlade's Introduction
Fri Mar 01, 2019 10:59 pm
Very nice, only thing I'd say is increase the cd or reduce the duration for his fear touch, and you'll be golden.
- Zeeb_BladeMember
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Join date : 2019-03-01
Age : 29
Re: ZeebBlade's Introduction
Fri Mar 01, 2019 11:03 pm
Fixed
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